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    "I have long since closed my eyes and will never open them."

    The words of the most foolish Uchiha that ever lived, Sasuke. So bent on vengeance that nothing else began to mean anything to him. He battled Danzo and made it out alive with the help of a god, Madara Uchiha, And lived to see a few more days. Of course, He ended up killing Danzo, But just barely. He ran incredibly low on chakra. He was again under the care of Madara and was brought back to health. With Danzo out of the way, there were two goals left. He had to finish off Konoha and all of its elders, And kill Madara. With the former within grasp he began his surprise assault on Madara.

    The older of the two continued to toy with the young Uchiha, Phasing in and out of existence as he saw fit to aggravate the child. Sasuke became frustrated, Unable to land a single hit on Madara who seemed to be doing nothing. Going as far as dawning his Tobi guise again to further agitate him. Sasuke, as per usual, Began to spam Amaterasu without regard for its effects. Eventually Sasuke summoned Susano'O with the last of his chakra and attempted to finish his assault on Madara and failed. He was now blind and plunged into insanity for only moments before his life was brought to an end by Madara.

    After this, Taka was quickly and brutally murdered at the hands of Madara Uchiha who chose that they deserved to die because of their loyalty to Sasuke. Karin was the first to be killed, Then Jugo and finally Suigetsu. Madara then commented he needed to finish the Moons Eye plan quickly and went on to fight the 8 tails and eventually captured him through the use of the Sharingan. Forcibly bringing it to a calmed state where he then dispelled the energy of the eight tails and then brought Hachibi to a hide out and proceeded to seal him away. Because of only two remaining members, This took almost a week of constant sealing.

    Kakashi and the group returned to Konoha. Kakashi was made Rokudaime Hokage, The sixth, And called out to all of their major allies, This included Konan, Gaara, and the Lightning Nations, Raikage. The Raikage was the first to get to the village of Konoha, And informed Kakashi that the eight tails has been sealed away and that only Naruto remained. This made Kakashi reassess his plans he had made and chose to hide Naruto far from Konoha but the place has yet to be decided. He knew that Madara would come for Naruto and is preparing the remains of Konoha for an onslaught like it had never seen.

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    You get one kage leveled technique.

    Name:
    Clan: (Cannot be an extinct clan. Uchiha and Kaguya are examples.)
    Rank: (Jounin and above. This means ANBU are available, Or you could be jounin/ANBU/Body guard from the Lightning or Amegakure.)
    Age:
    Elements: (Two. Three if one is linked to your Kekke Genkai, Wood as an example.)
    Village: (Konohagakure, Kumogakure or Amegakure.)
    Specialty: (Med, Fuin, Gen, Tai, Nin.)
    Bloodline: (Create one, No sharingan and bone manipulation.)
    Techniques: (List six and your Kage leveled technique.)
    Appearance: (What do you look like?)
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    Name: Raika
    Clan: Inryō
    Rank: Body guard for Konan of Amegakure
    Age: 24
    Elements: Alcohol, Water, Fire
    Village: Amegakure
    Specialty: Ninjutsu/Genjutsu
    Bloodline: Alcohol release Jutsu

    Techniques: Arukoton: uisukī raitā - Raika takes a large drink of his gourd and exhales an extremely potent mist that burns the eyes of his opponents, The longer this lingers the more damage that is done later on. This is often mixed with a low level fire technique to set them ablaze, his opponents, at a later time.

    Katon: Ash Pile Burning - This jutsu produces a combustible material prior to ignition. The user spews superheated ash from their mouth. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

    Gejutsu: Inshu endeba yume - The genjutsu is cast through sight. The genjutsu is signalled by the use of his Uisukī Raitā. He then causes the enemy to feel as though they are drunk which causes their mind to become impaired, Making it difficult for them to fight back or even attack.

    Arukoton - Nomi Sugiru Ni - Raika takes one of his gourds and drinks all of it in one drink, Chugging it. He then takes several seconds to digest it and forms a seal, and exhales. This is mixed with vomit, alcohol and water. This is often used to distance his enemies from him.

    Katon - Body Burning - A technique that Raika uses to teleport. The user is consumed by a flame and disappears. Ashes often appear to make it look like a suicide technique. The ashes are then thrown around to throw off tracker nin who use scent.

    Arukoton - arukōruburēdobisshori - A minor summoning jutsu, Raika summons his clans special blade that is bathed in two hundred year old alcohol. He uses the blade to maim, Not kill. As the alcohol can go directly into the blood stream it causes the blood to become ignitable and allows the enemy to become burned and combusted from a fire jutsu.

    Kage attack: Eremento Metsuki - Nise no Amaterasu - In his travels, He had actually met Itachi who was very kind to him. The two began to converse and he eventually learned the existence of Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu. Since he did not have enough genjutsu skill to mirror tsukuyomi, He created a fake Amaterasu that he could also produce through his eyes. This took nearly five years of training, From the day he was eighteen till the day he turned twenty three, He practiced and eventually mastered this, Even being able to turn the flames into a black color. But they were far, far, far from the same potency. People at times believed he was an "Uchiha wa ni Sharingan" or, An Uchiha with no Sharingan.


    Apperance: He is a rather tall man with long dark hair at waist length and dark skin. He carries six gourds on him that all contain various forms of alcohol of various strengths. The gourds are rather small and are often on his waist. He wears the Jounin outift from Amegakure. His forehead protector is
    slashed through like Konans.


    Personality: He is stalwart man who is more then willing to trust those who have gained the trust and help of Konan. He is quite a vocal man with a great intelligence over many subjects in the shinobi world. He is always seen with a smile and rarely has it gone from his face.

    Biography: He grew up in Amegakure during a time of war. This had scarred him for many years and was found by the three Ame oprhans, Nagato, Yahiko and Konan. He was quite beaten up and was presumed dead more then once at a very young age. He was one of the first to join Yahiko's gang. Over the years he grew strong, Through alcohol. Though his cohorts did not agree with this, This is what he chose to use to deal with reality. Over the years his alcoholism only got worse and eventually became the root of his jutsu.

    He was eventually alone again as his three best friends left him. Yahiko died a short time after his alcoholism got bad. The death of Yahiko only made it worse, Eventually he became Amegakures drunk and was usually found passed out in alley ways and in the middle of streets, Heavily reeking of alcohol. Eventually, His alcoholism got better, But only weeks later, He was back on the wagon and drinking heavily upon hearing the news that Nagato had died. Konan was the only one left. He is rarely seen sober these days, and when he is, He is quite violent and angry with the world, This can be attributed to him having a hang over. Konan does not approve of his ways, But knows he is an intelligent shinobi with much to offer.

    Recently he was choesn to be Konans bodyguard to go to Konoha to meet with the new Hokage, Kakashi Hatake.
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    Lemme know if I need to change anything. I'll add the kage technique tomorrow...

    Name: Emiko
    Clan: Kimura
    Rank: Jounin
    Age: 22
    Elements: Wind/Lightning
    Village: Konohagakure
    Specialty: Med
    Bloodline: None

    Techniques: Shousen Jutsu (Mystical Palm Technique)- This is a technique that allows medical ninja to heal wounds of others and their own through chakra focused to their hands. Could possibly be used as a defense by sending an excess amount of chakra into an enemies body causing them to go into a comatose state.

    Kaze Mesu (Wind Scalpel)- Technique in which chakra is gathered around the hands to make a sharp blade. Wind type chakra makes the blade sharper. Used in medical ninjutsu as a tool for surgeries and dissections the technique removes the need for invasive surgery. This technique can also be used as an offense.

    Ranshinshō (Nervous System Rupture)- A technique that combines medical ninjutsu and lightning element. Chakra is converted into electricity which causes an opponent’s nervous system signals to become jumbled.

    Taijutsu: Chakra Enhanced Strength- A jutsu in which the user carefully directs chakra to their hands or feet which can be released at a precise moment to increase their strength.

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Poison Dart Frogs- Emiko’s summon. Brightly colored frogs which secrete poison from their skin, but it is not enough to cause damage to an enemy unless applied to a weapon. Some of the chemicals secreted by the frogs are useful in medicines such as painkillers and muscle relaxants.

    Haritsuba (Spitting Needles)- Taijutsu technique which consists of spitting needles from the mouth.

    Kage: Sōzō Saisei (Creation Rebirth)- Emiko concentrates and stores chakra in a tattoo of the Konohagakure leaf symbol on her right wrist. If the seal were to be realeased it would cause rapid cellular regeneration as the chakra is released, allowing her to heal any wounds on herself. This technique cannot be used often though as it shortens the lifespan of the user.

    Appearance: Emiko is relatively fair skinned with long strawberry blonde hair. Her hair is hip length with long bangs that just cover her grey-green eyes. She will often pull her hair back into a single thick braid that falls down her back when she is training or on missions. Emiko wears her forehead protector as a headband, with the metal plate turned slightly so it runs down the right side of her head. For clothing, she wears a simple olive green fitted t-shirt underneath which she wears a long sleeved mesh shirt. She wears knee length black leggings under black shorts, with her ninja bag strapped to her right thigh. Emiko also has a small Konoha leaf symbol tattooed on her right wrist.

    Personality: Emiko is for the most part fairly happy. She smiles often and laughs at everything, especially herself since she can be rather clumsy at times. She can be very quiet, but sometimes talks way too much especially when she is nervous. Emiko wears her emotions on her sleeve and very rarely attempts to hide how she’s feeling. She dislikes fighting, but will do so if she has to. She tries to get along with everyone and cares deeply for her friends.

    Biography: Emiko grew up in Konohagakure raised by her parents. Her childhood wasn’t particularly bad or particularly good. Her parents mostly ignored her once she was old enough to take care of herself. She made a fair amount of friends in school, and graduated without standing out from everyone else much at all. As she got older though, and became more interested in medical ninjutsu she began to separate herself from her peers in terms of skill. Now at jounin level, Emiko is fairly well known for her skills with medical ninjutsu, and her abilities to combine the jutsus with her wind and lightning elements.
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    Name:Raph
    Clan: Olome
    Rank: Anbu
    Age:21
    Elements: Water
    Village: Kumogakure
    Specialty: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
    Bloodline: None.
    Techniques: Water Style Serpent Summon: Summons a huge serpent made of water.

    Tsunami Flood: A huge tsunami strikes the area and is completely covered with water.

    Water Style Serpent's Liter: After summoning a huge serpent this justsu allows the serpent to cough up water and create ten small versions of it.Each the size of a human child.

    Water Style Water Barrier:Creates a barrier of water at any size chosen,but the bigger it is the more chakra it will take.It can repel most attacks it deals and sometimes bounces attacks back.

    Kage Technique: Water Style Three Headed Serpent: A huge three heaed serpent is created that creates a huge tsunami that is three stories high and creates thirty small sepents.This jutsu is only used in rage or when in great peril.The opponents who survive from the tsunami face a greater danger that awaits for them.The three headed serpent shoots out a devastating trio water ball after he gives the signal to launch it.

    Appearance: Has black hair,brown eyes,and light brown skin.Five foot eight inches and wears anbu clothes in blue with black jacket and black shoes.Carries his axe on his back and has an mp3 in one pocket and playing cards in another.

    Personality:Mostly quiet and speaks calmly,likes to keep to himself,and a helpful and caring guy.He cares more for others,day dreams most of the time, and always wants some time to rest.Takes his time but doesn't want to be a bother at the same time.Sometimes he doesn't feels like using all his energy for little stuff.Likes to listen to music and play cards every now and then.More of a defensive type of person unless he is full of rae he will go all out attacking his opponents.

    Biography:He became very interested with the mythical beast known as the serpent when he heard fishers tell their story about their encounter with the beast.One day he had seen a blurry out cast of it when he was swimming.Each day he practiced making his own jutsu based on the serpent after school was over.He bacame successful and improved it into bigger and stronger versions.His chakra contol exceeded his fellow shinobi and was made an anbu.Raph carries an axe that can cut through some metal atfer focusing chakra on it to make water form around it.
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    Name: Kuroki Tlipoca
    Clan: Tlipoca
    Rank: Jounin
    Age: 19
    Elements: Wind, Lightning
    Village: Kumogakure
    Specialty: Taijutsu/Kenjutsu
    Bloodline: Smoking Mirrors: Kuroki is capable of reflecting an exact replica of the current opponent he is facing. Those that fall victim to this technique are also overwhelmed by continual visions of people which are suggested to be precursors to their eventual deaths. (This generally means, you see your reflection or the person who will kill you in the late future. I can let you see my original form if I want to, don't say "Pfft. your jutsu doesn't work on me!!".
    Using this unique Kekkei Genkai, Kuroki can track his opponents by reflecting their souls on his own soul, making him a lethal tracker.

    Techniques:
    Luna Storm - When Kuromasa is swung while the blade is ignited by lightning chakra, it will create a blast of energy made of wind and sliced leaves.

    Ni no Kata "Tsukiyoha (Leaf of the Moonlit Night) - Wielding both swords, Koruki brings both arms up and then subsequently brings them down while slowly seperating them, until they are fully split, where his arms now become parallel with the ground, unleashing a powerful wave of chakra, resulting in the appearance of falling leaves from a tree.

    Mirror of the Moon Wolf - By using a small token of blood, Kuroki can summon a wolf with snow white fur and red markings which stretch across it's head and to the end of it's tail. Despite it's quite huge size (Roughly the same size as Kuroki) it can move at almost blinding speeds or lend Kuroki it's powerful mirror like sheild (When the wolf uses it it becomes a dangerous weapon, to Kuroki it's pretty much another way defending himself.)

    Magna Storm - Kuroki skates along the ground, swinging his glaive from left to right. Small blue shockwaves appear around him as he does this move. As earlier, Kuroki ends this move by throwing his sword, unleashing a small electrical surge to disrupt other's sense electrical currents.

    Eclipse - Kuroki swings his sword forward wildly three times. Each swipe conjures swathes of blue-black lightning. At the third strike, Kuroki throws his sword at the enemy before bringing it back.


    Kage Technique:
    World of Ten Thousand Feasts: Using Sōru Ītā, Kuroki summons/creates a skull that consumes the whole blade and becomes bigger than Kuroki himself. With a demonic appearance of a skull, two glowing dots which pierce through the darkness of the skeletal two eyeholes. With a 360 degree slash, the tongue of Sōru Ītā creates 3 balls of energy taking the form of a large mouths that follows the arc of the preceeding sword swing, completely surrounding and devastating Kuroki's current location, as the attacks rotate around and disperse away from him in a large circular motion.
    Ever after this attack, Kuroki can still use this vicious form as a type of sheild/sword/bladed whip fusion though this form can only be used for roughly 3 posts.

    Appearance: Kuroki supports thick and large hair which messy and lets several hang just above his eye which is of a brownish black type colour with 3 earrings around his left ear, each with a different ornate design.
    He bears a distinct Japanese influence in his choice of clothing. He wears a white, red lined haori (Think of a Soul Reaper captain's jacket with sleeves and a hood) that seems to have a hood, along with slightly shorter than normal, light-colored hakama (Think of Bleach Soul Reaper pants, without the folds.). Underneath his haori, he wears a navy blue shirt with a large white X pattern on the front.
    addition is a long black scarf with gold lining, wrapped around his neck with the majority hanged loosely.

    Kuroki wears pieces of armor, in his case gold and black armored boots and a dull blue-green section that covers his abdomen.

    Kuroki possesses a massive Glaive weapon, sporting a massive black blade which is roughly 6ft and decorated with a white outline and white ornate designs coming from the bottom, reaching halfway. The width of the blade is 1m wide.
    The handle of the glaive is extremely unique, resembling the spine of a human man (Same length as a average human spine.). Connected to a skull which seems to connect the handle to the whole blade. The skull rests at the bottom of the blade (30cm up the blade). An ancient treasure that was thought to be destroyed in the ninja world. Little did people know was that it was hiding in the form of the spine with a skull connected to it. By chance a young Kuroki found this weapon and figured out the ancient secret of this weapon and is now his second treasured weapon. This weapon has a unique property, instead of cutting through the physical form it insteads consumes the evil essence of the body which in stored in the blade. After the souls it consumes have filled the blade, the glaive (I'll call it Sōru Ītā (Soul Eater)) consumes the blade and rests for roughly 2 hours before it can form another blade. Koruki usually carries the handle on a strap

    Kuroki carries a nodachi blade by the name Kuromasa. The handle and hilt is typical of that of any other katana except they are coated in a white ornate design. The blade changes depends on Kuroki's will to kill. If he has no will to kill which would be a majority of the time, the blade appear stays inside it's sheath which is pure black decorated in white ornate designs unable to cut anything as a blade (But with Kuroki's skill, the sheath can still be used to force air currents into an opponents direction in form of a slash) and functions more as a beating stick than anything else though the sheath cannot be broken easily. When he does have the intent to kill however, the sheath like shell can be removed from Kuromasa revealing a black blade. Kuromasa itself if one includes the handle is four feet long (The blade being 3 feet long). Kuroki's two styles of fighting with this weapon is rather simple in concept. Using it much quicker than a normal katana despite it's size, Kuroki can combo hit much easier this way. His second style of fighting is more of a complicated acrobatic style, varying from flips, dodges, rolls, spins and quicker reflexes.

    Personality: Koruki is that guy--questionable in every sense of the word—that will instantly give you a gut feeling. Eerily calm, he seems to do things on his own accord; laughing and chatting one minute then vanishing into silence the next, he takes what he wants whenever he feels like it and shrugs boundaries off as if they're made of sand. Beneath a flippant nature, there is a feeling of bottomless terror that surrounds him, one which either draws people in or tells them to stay far away.

    In a way, he’s almost like a very noticeable wall flower. Subtle and unhurried, you’ll never find Koruki anywhere but breezing through the background of any situation he puts himself in. Even when he’s completely out of place in an environment, he is still able to blend in somehow, completely at ease and self assured with whatever he does.

    Biography:
    Born in the Land of Iron, his family was constantly harrassed by a group of rouge ninja who wanted their powers for their own evil intentions. This caused the clan to move to village Hidden in the Clouds in such a happy time. After three painful years his family fought through the dangerous deserts and mountains of the ninja world, losing many members on the way while putting a huge scar in the rouge ninja's ranks. By now the young boy's special ability began to manifest within him, completely destroying his identity and now reflecting the fears and doubts (Think of it like this. A blank canvas of the human body with memories, videos of their negativity.) of anyone who looked at him, thus destroying his childhood when he arrived at Kumogakure.

    For most of his life, young Kuroki was harassed by many kids and adults after seeing such a negative world projected through the young boy's body. In the end, Kuroki began to go insane until a young boy saved him from his bottomless pit of despair, bringing him back into the light. For 4 years the young mates got closer and closer, slowly giving him control over his unique Kekkei Genkai and allowing people to see him as Kuroki and not as their negativity in a human form.
    This young boy's name was Ruki a distant relative to the Raikage (Meaning he is nothing like the genetically jacked freaks.). As the two friends got older Koruki began to train in the way of a Samurai while Ruki trained in the way of a Shinobi, both teaching the other a move or so on the way.
    Six years later and both students passed with flying colours, until that faithful day... Ruki was sent on a mission and returned in a bodybag, his face destroyed beyond reconigtion.
    Slowly he closed himself off from the world, honing his skills so he could find this fiend and avenge his "brother".

    Though being young, Koruki showed alot of promise, allowing him to travel with the Raikage to Konohagakure to help Kakashi protect Naruto after the young ninja taught him something valuable.

    It's extremely crap.
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    What a world that I'm livin' in,
    will the rainstorms ever end,
    Still i feel-my path narrow,
    I run again.


    See happiness is gone again,
    And then you see 'em,
    Grey clouds up above mane,
    Metaphor to my life mane.

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    Ruination.

    - Too many over powered or seemingly over powered techniques.
    - Moon is not considered an element as it is a celestial body.

    Snypx.
    - Too many grammar errors. Correct them.
    - Space time ninjutsu? Please, You'd need to be Madaras age to even begin to understand something like that.
    - Too many over powered techniques change them.
    - Space/time are not elements.
    - From Kumo wearing a Suna forehead protector? Not gonna work.
    - You're definitely going to have to change that biography too. Theres not much sense in it.
    Last edited by Madara™; 01-22-2010 at 03:33 AM.
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    Sorry about that bro.
    Artist's block as Weed presumes. But remember that my glaive doesn't attack the physical form.
    What a world that I'm livin' in,
    will the rainstorms ever end,
    Still i feel-my path narrow,
    I run again.


    See happiness is gone again,
    And then you see 'em,
    Grey clouds up above mane,
    Metaphor to my life mane.

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    Yeah, Don't worry much about it man. Its fine with me, And as for that. I think thats okay. As long as it doesn't instantly kill them.
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    Nope. It just consumes evil essence, so the person is still alive, just pure.
    What a world that I'm livin' in,
    will the rainstorms ever end,
    Still i feel-my path narrow,
    I run again.


    See happiness is gone again,
    And then you see 'em,
    Grey clouds up above mane,
    Metaphor to my life mane.

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    Sorry I just get confused about some things and I just randomly made him out of my feelings since two of my family members are gone I would make him weaker but I'm just going to edit it thanks anyway .

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    Quote Originally Posted by snypx View Post
    Sorry I just get confused about some things and I just randomly made him out of my feelings since two of my family members are gone I would make him weaker but I'm just going to edit it thanks anyway .
    Thats fine, You have a lot to edit. Good luck.
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    Finished with the biography. I know it's horrible but I have writer's block.
    What a world that I'm livin' in,
    will the rainstorms ever end,
    Still i feel-my path narrow,
    I run again.


    See happiness is gone again,
    And then you see 'em,
    Grey clouds up above mane,
    Metaphor to my life mane.

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    Eh, Not too much better then mine. But still, At least its done!
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    Name: Leo DiFiamma
    Clan: DiFiamma clan.
    Rank: Mo Zing - A traveling blade (Skills akin to ANBU)
    Age: 28
    Elements: Fire and Wind.
    Village: Hired by Konohagakure.
    Specialty: Taijutsu
    Bloodline: DiFiamma's Channelling.
    Techniques:
    DiFiamma's secret arts - Flame Channelling.
    This technique allows Leo to spout flames from the specially created gloves, shoes and jacket he recieved from his clan when he reached the age of 18.

    DiFiamma's secret arts - Wind Channelling.

    Same as the above, only with powerfull winds, and if he twists his arm when blowing off the winds, he can turn them into cutting winds.

    Genjutsu: The Floating Lotus Petal.

    This genjutsu works on hearing, allowing the user to bypass eye techniques. He can whistle a certain tune on his ocarina, or just with his lips (The latter has a much smaller range, and slightly less power). When you're trapped, you will see no difference at first, and Leo will throw something upward (or at least, thats what you see) then a bunch of kunai come falling from the sky, and from where they land, Lotus leaves rise upwards and float trough the sky, which will fly around and cut you to shreds within seconds.
    Few survive this without losing their sanity.

    Ninjutsu:Fire style - Sleeping lotus.
    Leo creates sparks of flames with his feet, hands or mouth, and they remain airborne. In the air, they get a more solid composition and begin to fly around the foe in circles. There is also a genjutsu mixed in this, which slows down the realization of time for those caught looking at the flames from the inside. After 20 seconds of this, where more and more flames are being added, the flames all rush to the center, where the opponent is, and crash into eachother in an almost crystal-like collision, which always forms a crimson lotus flower.

    Ninjutsu: Summoning jutsu.

    This jutsu allows the user to summon a creature he or she has made a contract with.

    Kage Technique: Fiamma Form.
    This highly exhausting technique allows the user to become like a flame. His body will lose physical form, and instead be a human-looking flame, and will only be solid when engaging the enemy in taijutsu. It takes 20 seconds before the technique auto-cancels itself to make sure the user doesnt die out of Chakra shortage. If the users flames are extuinguished by water or sand, the chakra drain gets even more intense.

    Appearance:

    Leo has dirty blonde hair, covered by a white Fendora with a cut on it's edge, and a flame symbol on the front. His orange eyes usually appear to be bored, and his face is decorated with scars from his battles in the past, as well as the rest of his body. He is not what you would call attractive, but despite the scars he isn't repulsive either. He clads himself in a black cloak, with a black vest with a turtle on the back, and a white shirt underneath it. He has leather arm, wrist and shoulderguards, and also leather guards on his lower legs, which go slightly over his knees. For pants, he wears simple loose black pants. He has white shoes with red soles, and reddish black gloves with silver on the knuckles, and the fingers, with gaps at the joints.
    Personality: He tends to be serious, and quite sarcastic. He doesnt like hypocrits or truly bad people, and he believes living the life of a mercenary is the easyest, and most fulfilling way to live. That way he doesnt have to deal with the hassle of attaching himself to a village. He also believes that the ninja villages are overrated.


    Biography:
    Born in Konoha, he was taught ninjutsu and taijutsu until the age of 14. After that, he studied Genjutsu for 4 years while doing missions, and became a fully fledged Jounin at the age of 20. Then he and his squad of Genin were sent on a mission which was supposed to be nothing more then bringing food from one town to another, but it turned out to be an exceptionally dangerous mission, as he almost lost his life and his students lost theirs.
    Enraged by the lack of intelligence on Konoha's part, he left the village in search of inner peace in the mountains. When he was 22 he left the mountains, and he had lost his anger and will to fight.
    Unfortunatly for him, fate intervened and got him back into the fight, after he was beaten up by a few robbers in a small town at the foot of the mountain.
    He then noted this world was black and corrupt, and Good could not survive.
    He became a mercenary the day after, and has been protecting trade caravans for a fee ever since.
    Now, another 6 years later, the 28 year old mercenary is starting to rediscover the world, seeing beautifull nature, untainted by human hands, and is beginning to lose his hatred.
    Last week he was contacted by Konoha shinobi, and he finally decided he would see what job they had to offer.
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    Name: Shigure Ryuuga

    Clan: Ryuuga

    Rank: Ninja Monk/Anbu/Body Guard

    Age: 26

    Elements:

    Village: Konohagakure

    Specialty: Genjutsu, Taijutsu

    Bloodline: Oni Ge-Touxei (demonic gateway):
    The "evil" side of the Amatsu Ge-Touxei (heavenly gateway) allows the user to open a gate to the demonic plane through the use of a ritual that includes the sacrifice of chakra and human blood. This allows the users of the kekai genkai to call on the assistance of an oni, a gigantic creature with sharp claws, wild hair, and two long horns growing from its head.

    Techniques:

    Seishou Ishoku no Jutsu (Chakra implanting technique):
    By simply touching his opponent Shigure can plant a ball of chakra in their chakra system that can be released at any time with the use of a simple hand seal. When the chakra is released it will travel to the brain putting the affected person under a genjutsu.

    Bringer-of-Light Technique:
    When this jutsu is actuvated the target seems to be inveloped by a blinding flash of light. Often used as a distraction or a set-up for other jutsu.

    Demonic Illusion: Slaves of Satan:
    When someone is affected by this jutsu they see multiple demon-like figures rise from the ground and begin to drag the person in the ground while at same time ripping at their flesh causing the person to feel extreame pain.


    Demonic Illusion: Devil's Mouth:
    This genjutsu causes the target to see the face of a huge demon to appear on the ground beneath them. Its mouth opening up and swallowing the affected person who then falls a great distance into a pit of fire. The genjutsu causes the target severe mental trauma.

    Demonic illusion: Leeching hatred:
    Causes the affected person to see the person in the world whom they hate the most. The person they see will then attack. Usually the person is too distracted by their hatred to realize that it is a genjutsu.

    Secret technique: Hell's gate opening:
    To activate this technique the user needs to perform a ritual that consists of drawing a circle on the ground and using a sacrifice of blood and chakra to open the gate to the demon plane. An oni can then freely move through the gate and will assist the person who summoned it as payment. Instead of drawing a circle on the ground Shigure uses his Rinka Enreki-Tou making the ritual much easier. Once the oni is summoned it cannot interact with the physical world without a host. The oni can enter any living thing and take control though it can only take control of a human with a weak will or one that will allow the oni to enter its body.

    Kage Technique: Dark World Summoning:
    By sacrificing massive amounts of chakra the user can give an oni a physical body. Similar to a tailed beast(though much less powerful) the oni's body will be made entirely out of chakra. Using this jutsu will drain almost any person of all their chakra. If the person does not have enough chakra they can sacrifice a piece of their soul instead though this will shorten their lifespan.



    Appearance: Shigure is slightly taller that the average man standing at 6'2" and is moderately muscular. He has long straight black hair that he ties up in a pony-tail and slight facial hair growing along his jaw and upper-lip. He also has ten distinguishing piercings all of which are small gold circles. Three on his right ear, two on his left, one in his right eyebrow, one in his lower lip and three along his jaw. He usually can be found wearing loose-fitting tan pants and wooden sandals on his lower half while wearing a sleeveless white shirt with a v-neck tan vest over top of that and red wrist bands that come about half way up his forearms. He is almost always carrying his Rinka Enreki-Tou a large circular bladed weapon with the durability and destructive force of an axe and the cutting ability of a blade.(like a chakram only much bigger)

    Personality: For most of his life Shigures only friends had been from the demon plane, because of this he doesn't know how to talk to normal people and will often say things that would be considered rude or inconsiderate. Most of the time Shigure will be training or talking to one of the many demons he has to know almost too well. Though he spends most of his time by himself its not that he dislikes other's company its that most of the time people dont want him around and that's fine with him.

    Biography: Born in the into the Ryuuga clan, a clan famous for their ability to summon heavenly spirits with great healing abilities, Shigure is effected by a mutation that only occurs one time in one thousand children of the clan. The Oni Ge-Touxei a variation on the clans bloodline that causes the clan member's chakra to attract demons instead of angels. An out cast from the clan, Shigure spent most of his time consulting the demons whom he had summoned, and learned many things.

    Fearing that Shigure would become a demon himself the elders of the Ryuuga clan sent Shigure to the fire temple to learn the ways of the ninja monk. Though after Shigure had finished his training at the temple he immediately left hoping to become a ninja of konohagakure.

    Shigure was 16 when he entered konoha, he graduated from he academy the same year, became chuunin at 17, jounin at 19 and then finally anbu at 22. Despite his skills as a ninja Shigure never made any friends and continued to keep demons as his closest allies. He was recently appointed as body guard of Kakashi Hatake.
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    Name: Tenpachi
    Clan: Ishikawa
    Rank: Body Guard
    Age: 25
    Elements: Katon (Fire), Suiton (Water)
    Village: Amegakure
    Specialty: Ninjutsu/Medical Ninjutsu.
    Bloodline: Ryuutai Ayatsuri (Fluid Manipulation)
    This ability allows people to control the fluids inside of their body. The Ishikawa’s used this bloodline to perform chemically enhanced techniques, preferably to their elements(as long as they were from the mouth). By injecting themselves with chemicals they were able to manipulate them and use them in various jutsu. They were, however, not immune to the chemicals that they injected themselves with (meaning if the injected themselves with a normal acidic they were going to die). This is why they developed specially made chemicals that were “dormant” until they made contact with the outside air, thus letting them safety use chemicals and even keep them in their body for extended periods of time without causing any harm to them. Tenpachi himself carries five different chemicals: 2 poisons, 2 acids(sulfuric and hydrochloric, one of which is used for his Kage technique), and an unknown chemical that enlarges fires which are in containers that hang from his waist. Also, the chemicals he carries expand when exposed to heat meaning when inside the body the chemicals expand. He also control them even after they leave his body by loading them with his chakra. (also as regards to fluid manipulation he can also remove poisons from his body that where inserted by the enemy, granted if he does it before he dies).



    Techniques:

    Katon: Karyū Endan (Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Missile)
    First the user inhales air and then this technique exhales a long stream of incredibly hot fire from the user's mouth like that of a flamethrower

    Suiton: Mizurappa (Water Release: Violent Water Wave)
    Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases. Having many variations.

    Kagakuseihinkiri (Chemical Mist)
    After either injecting themselves with any chemical of their choosing a member of the clan can spray this chemical as a fine mist that can envelope an entire area.

    Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Technique)
    The user is able to create clones made of water.

    Mizu Bunshin Kyuuzou no Jutsu (Water Clone Explosion Technique)
    This works in combination with the water clone technique and Fluid Manipulation to create a clone that will explode on command. This will send water in all directions and in some cases the water used will be from a previous water technique that contained acid.

    Chakurasaibō hakai (Cytocidal Chakra)
    The user concentrates their chakra to their hands/finger tips and creates a chemical though chakra manipulation. Just before making contact with an organic substance they release the chemical though a small burst that hits the skin and instantly kills cells and spreads much like a virus. If the chemical reaches the area over the heart the infected will die. However, the chemical can be subdued.

    Shōsenjutsu (Mystical Palm Technique)
    This medical ninjutsu allows the user to speed up the body's natural healing process by sending chakra from their hands into a wound or afflicted body part. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield.

    Kage Technique: Suiton: Ko Sui Taikai (Water Release: Great Acidic Ocean)
    Before using this technique Tenpachi eats a food pill to increase his chakra and injects himself with his special chemical engineered version of hydrochloric acid which is used just for this technique. Once done, he spews out an enormous volume of water that can crush opponents. Once finished the volume of water is so great that it would seem like an ocean was created.

    Appearance:
    Tenpachi wears a plain white robe with no patterns or identifying clan symbols, grey pants and no shoes (the containers are covered by this robe). He wears no headband. He has white spiky hair (similar to kakashi’s), medium sized dark pupils, pale skin while standing at 6 feet.

    Personality:
    Tenpachi is the type of guy to consider everything a pain in the ass, and openly expresses it. As an insomniac, he doesn’t get much sleep and therefore is irritated easily; mostly by cocky/overconfident people and people who he considers to have no common sense. When working on missions (such as guarding Konan) he is strictly serious and hates joking around. He is lazy but reliable is a sense.

    Biography:
    Tenpachi was born into the once feared Ishikawa clan of Amegakure. During the days of the Third Great Shinobi World War the clan was under constant attack due to its strong ties to the political system of The Land of Rain and Amegakure. This, of course weakened their power due to the mass chaos. During one of the attacks Tenpachi witnessed his older brothers death in an effort to protect him. This scared Tenpachi and drove him to want to become powerful enough to where he could not only protect himself but protect those close to him. He was quick to learn the tricks and trades of his Clans ability and was thought to be fit to one day lead the clan. However, Tenpachi wanted nothing to do with clan politics and left, determined to help others. Tenpachi eventually ran into a gang that was striving for peace in The Land of Rain and asked him to join to which Tenpachi agreed. He became good friends with the gang’s leader, Yahiko, as Yahiko liked Tenpachi and how active he was in the gang. Yahiko eventually introduced Tenpachi to Konan and Nagato who also became friends of his. They became people he could trust and rely on. When Yahiko died Tenpachi felt the same as when his brother had died—defenseless. Tenpachi couldn’t sleep and lost his motivation for fighting which plunged him into a state of laziness. Nagato, who was furious, killed Hanzo and all of his allies which included Tenpachi’s own clan. Nagato eventually talked to Tenpachi and gave him his motivation again. Unfortunately, the defenseless feeling came back when Nagato died and Tenpachi resorted back to his previous state. Konan, who was one of the few people that actually knew Tenpachi convinced him to believe in Nagato and Yahiko and believe what they believed in. This helped Tenpachi once again regain his motivation but his personality stayed the same. Since he was one of the few people Konan trusted, he was made her Bodyguard along with a man named Raika. .
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